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Deviousness `anmari has been spreading her infectious positivity throughout our community for over 6 years. Throughout this time Ana has been at the core of all things devious, passionately developing an eclectic gallery, helping organise devmeets, participating in chat events and also recently completed dedicating her time as a Community Volunteer. We are absolutely delighted to bestow the Deviousness Award for May 2013 to `anmari, congratulations! Read More
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Sta.sh
How's that for some smoke up your ass?
how i didn't thought about that first?!?!?!
bwahahaha
There is something about the piece that is keeping it from really standing out. I don't know how you feel about a little critiquing, but if you don't mind...maybe I can give it a shot.
It might be a combo of the use of color and your use of space. It seems a bit busy and crowded.
Maybe giving a little more space around the logo might help. My eye is going all over the place and not necessarily being drawn into it. Maybe having less characters in the scene might help.
Also, some of the monsters (especially in the extreme foreground can be darkened and blurred a bit. There are bright colors all over this piece, so that may have your eye bouncing all over the place. Maybe some of the colors for the characters in the background can be less saturated. Adding slight lighting from the night sky and the energy beams bouncing off of some of the other characters may help too.
I don't know if it's too late to play around with it, but I hope that this may give you an idea of how to make such a great poster even better.
I hope that you didn't mind me trying to give you a few suggestions (Some people don't like constructive criticism at all). It only helps us grow as artists.
Anyways. The characters are great. I can't wait to see more.
It's cool man. I'm glad that you were able to use and take in some of my suggestions. Just keep it in the back of your mind and use them for the next big project.
That's cool that your using flash for your illustrations because that's what I do too (At least for cleaning up the lineart). Maybe we can compare notes one of these days or somethin'.
I like using flash, even to draw over scanned rough pencil sketches to get a quick and clean drawing. I just wish that flash had better brush options.