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just a simple starfire, kinda mix between the comic and cartoon, and as for the hair, i guess thats kinda 60's inspired

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:iconmaizekid74:
Hey Bob , so here is my thought on this one.. the buttock on the leg screen right feels like it needs to be bigger, towards the top where the leg connects to the butt. I like how you simplified the back hand but maybe you could have show a bit more of a finger separation in one of the simple shapes.. just a thought. The "S" curve this is following is really nice and your ability to avoid any really blatant tangents or otherwise is amazing. Other than that I love this piece... and I dont like that DA makes you write a 100 word crit when I could have done it in less. LOL ;)

Great job and inspiring as usual
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cool!!!

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:iconfire-tisane:
I like it. How did you get that soft glow on her btw?

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:iconnorthchavis:
Love her hair!!

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:iconsterlingvisions:
Very cool! love the colors.
:iconsbusfield1977:
All your illustrations look like a freeze frame from an amazing animation movie.
:iconbbedlam:
very cool, and kinda freaky :)

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:iconsilverraven101:
Sick pose, and the lighting is amazing.

Kudos, man.

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:iconsupermichaelman:
I love the lighting

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:icondusty-abell:
man i love your color and style, you just keep delivering the sweetness........
:iconsolidcitizen62:
Ha ha! Strang you are the Mang!
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